A significant event in my life

In your own essay, focus on ONE event which has proven significant in your life. The event you choose may not necessarily be a positive event; instead, this event could be one which has caused you to realize something about yourself or the world around you.

 

However, be careful to limit your topic effectively. For example, if you say your parents’ divorce impacted your life, you will have problems because this topic is too broad—you could probably write a short book about it. In addition, be careful not to choose a topic which you are too emotionally involved in; unless you can speak objectively about this event, the audience will feel uncomfortable reading your essay or the essay will seem forced.  Avoid topics such as death of a family member, divorce, and even the birth of a child can be overdone.  In your essay you will narrate a story, using vivid details which engage the reader. Then in your conclusion, discuss the significance of this event in your life. In other words ask yourself how this event has impacted your life in the long term.

Your essay should be:

  • 2 fullpages minimum (3-4 pages preferred) (anything less than 2 full pages will not earn a passing grade)
  • correctly formatted in MLA style
  • include at least one correctly formatted quote

Make sure these marks are visible on your review sheet and that you have done the checks to get full credit.

 

On your own essay:

  1. Underline your thesis statement. Does it reflect the main idea of your paper? If you don’t have a thesis, make sure you add one to your paper, and then underline it.

    2. Bold all of your transitions that link your paragraphs. (Usually these start each paragraph and for events, they usually are time transitions) Again, if you do not have transitions, add these to your paper, and then bold them. Use your textbook to help you.

  2. Check your paper for the following. These are parts that will be graded in your review draft, so if you are not sure how to do them, please ask.
  • Use MLA format in the heading and header? If you aren’t sure, check the example in Document Sharing called Page Setup.
  • Read through your paper and change all of the you, and yoursto 3rd person or 1st
  • Use vivid details to tell your story.
  • In the conclusion, tell us the significance of the event.
  • Try to make this as good a draft as possible in terms of content, grammar, punctuation, and spelling. I realize you might still have some errors, but please proofread carefully, and I encourage you to have someone else read through it as well. You can certainly ask others in our class to help or someone at home.
  • Ensure the paper is at the minimum page requirement.

Remember that these are the points I will be looking at when I grade your paper, and just because this is a rough draft, it doesn’t mean it should be your first draft. You need to revise, edit, and proofread your paper before you submit it as your review sheet draft.  Additionally, it is always helpful to have someone else read your paper and help you, so if you can, please have someone else read it to help you make changes before submitting it.

If you have any questions about these review sheet marking requirements, please contact me, and I will help you. Also note that I don’t usually mark every grammar error, but mark a few of the ones you seem to be having the most problem with. It is your job to edit your paper for these types of errors or to ask for help in getting more information about these types of mistakes.

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